jack

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Full Name-jack Daqwson
Age-23
Birthday-may 20
Gender-boy

Power-Jack can like a cheeta. Lightening speed

Description-very handsome, very good looking and brownish blondish flowyish hair. He is not skiny but not fat. He usally wheres dark colors but is not goth.

Personality-He is cool, laid back and doesn't jump up right away at a problem. [exept for fire alarm.] He likes girls that are tha same as him cool and laid back.he likes to play jokes on people. One time pretended there was a fire.

History-he got his power having a race with a friend.He hoped to win and then realized he was running as fast as lightning and won the race and 5 bucksAnd now his freind isn't friend anymore. His parents both died and he is a only child.His parents died in a fire they he was playing another joke.

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Add some periods and stuff and that should do it

There is that a little better

Uhh, add a couple more sentences to each thing. I think you were rushed when you made this one.